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Lady Spots 'Help' on Car's Window in Traffic Jam, Realizes Something's Off – Story of the Day

Sonali Pandey
Dec 18, 2023
01:07 P.M.

While driving home, Elsa spots a girl in danger and decides to save her. But can she do that before time runs out?

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Elsa was driving home from a date, chatting with her friend Sarah on the phone, when a young girl in the car ahead caught Elsa's eye.

"Mark's a catch! And let's be real. You're 32, girl. You don't wanna end up alone…" Sarah was speaking with concern, but Elsa wasn't listening to her anymore.

She kept watching the girl in front of her. The girl wrote "help" on the car's fogged window before quickly erasing it and turning to the man driving the vehicle.

"Sarah, I'll call you back," Elsa hurriedly said and hung up.

Sensing something off about the car, Elsa started following it as the jam eased and saw the vehicle pull over at a gas station…

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Elsa parked her car discreetly and approached the girl while the man headed to the convenience store.

"Hey, are you okay?" she gently asked the girl.

The girl's eyes welled up. "He…is holding me and my sister hostage," she whispered. "Please, help us!"

Suddenly, the man appeared. "What are you doing?" he demanded, and Elsa spun around. Fear choked her words, but she stammered an explanation.

"Get out of here!" the man snapped, and without refueling his car, he sped away.

Elsa's heart pounded as she watched the gray Toyota leave.

Scrambling into her car, she grabbed her phone, her hands shaking, and dialed 911.

"911. What's your emergency?"

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Elsa told the dispatcher everything, and she assured her help was on the way.

But Elsa was scared. She knew losing sight of the car meant losing the girls, and she wouldn't let that happen.

So, with a firm grip on the steering wheel, she followed the Toyota at a safe distance. The road stretched before her, each mile fueled by her unwavering resolve. She wouldn't rest until the girls were safe.

Elsa followed the suspicious car through unfamiliar streets, but a momentary lapse in concentration resulted in her losing sight of it. Panic surged through her veins as she frantically scanned the surroundings.

But just as her hope dwindled, the gray Toyota reappeared, turning into a driveway and vanishing into a garage.

Relief washed over her as she cautiously parked her car and dialed 911.

The dispatcher again assured her help was on the way.

This time, Elsa waited, and after what seemed like the most strenuous minutes of her life, police sirens pierced the silence.

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Elsa approached the cops and pointed to the house. "The car is in there. The girl, too!"

The officers surrounded the house, and after a tense standoff, they stormed inside. She heard muffled shouts, indicating a confrontation. Then, a voice crackled over the walkie-talkie of a nearby officer. "Subject neutralized. The girl is safe."

Elsa rushed into the house and encountered a chaotic yet controlled scene. The man lay handcuffed and yelling while the small girl, clutching a toy, sat frozen in fear.

From the floor, he turned his head towards Elsa and the officers, anger evident in his eyes. "This is my daughter, fools! If you don't believe me, check the documents in the closet!"

The officers exchanged a look, and one of them moved to check the closet. The man was the girl's stepfather and had gained custody after his wife's death.

"And her sister? She mentioned a sister, officers!" Elsa cried.

"She's 17, practically an adult! She chose to leave us, to run away on her own! It was her decision!" the man grumbled.

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However, Elsa could feel something was wrong. She approached the girl and asked if she was in danger, but to Elsa's dismay, the girl shook her head.

Eventually, the officers and Elsa left the house, but Elsa glanced back one last time and saw the girl in the window, signaling help in sign language.

Elsa's breath caught in her throat. She turned to the officers. "Look, she's making the sign for help. We can't leave her here!"

"Ma'am, calm down, will you?" An officer said sternly. "Everything's fine. We checked the place. We have to go. And next time, we won't take your false alarms so kindly."

The cops left, but Elsa couldn't ignore her gut feeling.

***

As night arrived, Elsa crept towards the house. Reaching the window of the girl's room, she tapped gently. The girl awoke, startled, and approached the window, recognizing her.

Elsa signaled her to open the window, but a silent shake of the girl's head and a pointed finger at the lock on the window communicated the girl's helplessness.

Elsa typed a question on her phone. "Are you in danger?" and showed it to the girl.

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The child scribbled a message on a scrap of paper and pressed it against the windowpane: "Yes."

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Elsa's heart lurched. The girl returned to writing and pressed a sheet against the window. This time, it said:

"He caught us when we tried to escape. He took my sister to the forest. He said if one of us tries to leave or tell anyone, the other will get hurt. I was afraid to talk to the police. I don't know where he keeps her. Please find her."

Elsa's heart sank. She typed her response with trembling fingers: "I will find her." and showed it to the girl.

Suddenly, the girl flinched. Her eyes widened in terror as the door creaked open, flooding the room with light. She dashed to her bed and hid under the covers. Elsa ducked under the window and peered inside the room carefully.

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The man entered, approached the girl's bed, and kissed her forehead. Then he left the room, closing the door behind him. Elsa retreated to her car with a heavy heart, but she had a plan. She knew he would leave to meet the other girl.

In the morning, Elsa's eyes were fixed on the house, waiting for the man's departure. Finally, he emerged from the house, got into his car, and drove away.

She followed him at a safe distance, and as they neared a forest, Elsa realized the risks of continuing to follow him by car.

So she navigated the uneven terrain on foot, her eyes searching for any sign of the man.

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After what seemed like an eternity, she spotted his car near an old, abandoned house. This had to be the place. But as she drew closer, Elsa realized she didn't know if the man was still inside, so she hid behind the bushes, watching the house. Her phone battery was drained, so she couldn't call the cops.

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An hour later, the door creaked open. The man emerged, locking it behind him before driving away. This was her chance. With a surge of adrenaline, Elsa moved towards the house.

Reaching the door, she tried the handle. It was locked. Undeterred, she retrieved a hammer from her car and, with a pounding heart, smashed it against the lock. The sound echoed through the forest, and finally, the lock gave way.

Elsa pushed the door open, stepping into the darkness. The air was stale and heavy, and in the corner, she saw a girl tied up and looking at her with frightened eyes.

"Hey, hey, it's okay. I'm here to help you," Elsa whispered, her voice trembling. But before she could take another step, a sharp pain erupted at the back of her head, plunging her into darkness.

As she fell, the girl's terrified cry echoed in her ears, then it all went black for her.

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Elsa's head throbbed as consciousness slowly returned. She found herself in a dimly lit basement, bound and trapped beside the young girl, Veronika.

Veronika revealed the horrifying story of how the man – her stepfather – had changed after her mother's demise. He had become a controlling man who wouldn't let his girls out of his sight, forcing them to stay indoors.

The truth was, he'd suffered psychologically and thought the girls leaving him meant his family was being broken.

When the girls tried to flee from him one day, he caught them and started keeping them apart, threatening them that if they went against his wishes, the two sisters would never see each other.

Suddenly, the basement door creaked open, interrupting them. The man entered, and Elsa's fear intensified. He stopped before her, his eyes devoid of warmth.

"You will be their mother," he said with a grin. "We will be a happy family once Monika joins us!"

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While he talked of a happy family, Elsa saw the cracks in his facade. The emptiness in his eyes and the desperation in his voice all spoke of a man consumed by his own delusions.

As the hours passed, Elsa and Veronika were forced to act out the charade of a happy family, their every move dictated by the man's commands and gun.

"See," he would say, "how wonderful it is to be a family."

Elsa and Veronika wanted to escape, and during dinner, Elsa noticed a glimmer of hope: the set of keys hanging from the man's belt.

As they ate in silence, her mind whirred, formulating a plan.

"Veronika, could you excuse us for a moment?" Elsa asked calmly.

Veronika, understanding the unspoken plea, quickly left the room. As soon as she was alone with the man, Elsa put her plan into action.

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"If I'm to be the girls' mother, wouldn't I be... your wife?" she inquired, a forced smile on her face.

The man's eyes narrowed, his curiosity piqued.

"And a wife has certain obligations," she continued, her voice laced with a practiced seduction. "Wouldn't you like some relaxation?" she asked, sitting between his legs.

Disgust churned in Elsa's stomach, but she pushed it down. Her only focus was securing those keys and escaping the man's clutches.

As she leaned closer, her hand reaching for his belt buckle, the man's guard lowered. The keys were within reach, but she needed a distraction.

"You deserve a rest," she whispered into his ears. "Let me take care of you."

Her words seemed to break the man's focus. He closed his eyes, allowing her to massage his shoulders. As she moved her hands down to his chest and stomach, her fingers finally grasped his belt. With a swift jerk, she yanked it free, sending the keys clattering to the floor.

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"Veronika, run!" Elsa yelled, adrenaline coursing through her veins.

Veronika burst through the door, grabbing the keys as she went. Elsa held the man at bay with the belt, buying Veronika precious time. Their struggle was fierce, the silence punctuated only by their gasps and grunts.

Finally, the man broke free, rage contorting his features. He shoved Elsa against the wall, her head hitting with a sickening thud. As her vision blurred, she saw him sprint out the door, his fury directed at Veronika.

Hours seemed to pass before Elsa regained consciousness. A flicker of joy lit up her heart – Veronika had escaped.

But the joy was short-lived. The acrid scent of gasoline filled the air, sending a wave of terror through her. The man had returned, his plans fueled by hatred and vengeance as he poured gasoline around the house.

Elsa watched helplessly from the floor as flames engulfed the structure, the ropes around her wrists and feet holding her captive.

The heat grew unbearable at one point, the smoke choking her lungs. Her last thoughts were of Veronika, free and safe, as the world faded away in a blaze of fire.

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But she awoke later, and Veronika's and Monika's faces appeared around her. They were in a hospital. Safe.

Veronika then revealed how she'd been able to find help and contact the cops after escaping the man's clutches.

"You know, I live alone," Elsa then said hesitantly. "Maybe...we could be a family?"

The girls' faces lit up with joy, and at that moment, they knew a new chapter filled with love and happiness would begin in their lives. They knew they would form a happy family.

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